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Last wall, dead wall by ~xportebois:iconxportebois:

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Submitted: April 17, 2008
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed: 1/160 second
F Number: F/4.0
Focal Length: 30 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Date Picture Taken: Apr 13, 2008, 1:59:30 PM

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Advanced critique welcome

Same spot that "Judges are dumb and blind" [link] in an abandoned factory, Lille, France.
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~teh-feckerer:iconteh-feckerer: Apr 21, 2008, 12:25:21 PM
Awesome shot! I love it! I'd offer advanced critique but, that's an area I'm not all so confident it. I jus' love the composition and order to this shot :)
~xportebois:iconxportebois: Apr 21, 2008, 12:32:47 PM
Thank you a lot !

For critique, maybe you could watch Judges Are Dumb And Blind [link] which was taken at the same spot, with the same light, but focused on three holes, and tell which one do you prefer, and why.

In first time, I posted only Judges... because it was more detailed, but when I looked back at this one, Last Wall..., I realize the number of holes and the linear composition was also really great.

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~pinkangel59495:iconpinkangel59495: May 8, 2008, 9:23:21 AM
C'est vraiment joli :)
J'aime bien les photos de trucs auxquels les gens font pas vraiment gaff'
~xportebois:iconxportebois: May 8, 2008, 9:45:09 AM
Merci bien (on trouve le même sujet ici [link])

En fait, je pense que c'est une des règles de base de l'UrbEx, que de redécouvrir des lieux, des endroits, des détails sinon banals. Comme si la beauté était partout, mais qu'elle ne se révélait que sous un angle donné :)

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~pinkangel59495:iconpinkangel59495: May 8, 2008, 10:14:38 AM
J';pense que c'est la plus belle conception d'la photo.. Bonne continuation!!
~dcurtis:icondcurtis: May 14, 2008, 11:08:16 AM
I prefer 'Judges Are Dumb And Blind'. this one, 'Last wall, dead wall' is good, but more an industrial photo, more documentarian. whereas 'Judges Are Dumb And Blind' is more like an abstract painting. also, I like the subtle color changes in 'Judges Are Dumb And Blind'
~xportebois:iconxportebois: May 14, 2008, 12:45:51 PM
Thanks for sharing your point of view. I often ask people who faved one but not the other why, what make difference for them.
I totally agree with the fact that on this one, the color changes and the texture are more interesting. But I still find Last wall dead wall gives another dimension, a larger view.
Probably the two shots are interesting but for totally different reasons.

Well, thanks again !

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~Foxx247:iconFoxx247: Jun 17, 2008, 11:53:47 AM
I like this shot over "Judges are dumb and blind" for a few reasons. Firstoff, it adds more perspective in my opinion, and has wonderful aesthetic appeal (I especially like the large bent rail at the top and rusted device near the bottom). Also, It just seems more complete, because I could see those few specific holes as a number of things in "Judges" and now seeing the wall full of these adds extra interest and mystery. I don't know if you get what I'm saying, I don't really know how to explain..
~xportebois:iconxportebois: Jun 17, 2008, 10:56:13 PM
Thanks a lot :)

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